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"Can I please have; five shortbread biscuits, two caramel tarts, a piece of chocolate cake, and three pieces of caramel slice," You thought about the order, "wait!  An orange juice as well pleases Pam."

Your boss looked at you in disbelief, "How can you eat that much food! You know your husband going to be shocked." Before going on a lengthy leave you work in a small cafe in the middle of your towns' shopping centre. Pam, you're boss, always treated you well.
"Well it's a reason not to eat my brother's food" You both shared a laugh, your older brother; Arthur, was well known for his horrible cooking skills or British delicacies as he called them. At least for Arthur your brother Alfred still lives with him and he has no sense of taste either.

"Do you need a lift home, (Name)" Pam asks.

"No I'm fine; I'm actually here with Gilbert believe it or not. We were actually doing the shopping and he forced me to come here to sit down." Your hands travel down to your swollen abdomen, your hands graze gently over your pregnant belly. "He has become very protective lately. You do now we've chosen him as godfather. But we're keeping it a surprise." Pam gives a little smirk she know Gil quite well, knows what he like. "OH! That's right I came here to get Gilbert a milkshake! Do you think you could and a strawberry milkshake to the order please?"

"Of course anything for you (Name)." Pam walks off to complete your long order. Today you had to go to the doctors for a check-up on the 'baby', you found out that you were actually having triplets, all three perfectly healthy but the news shocked you. Everyone would think that the first person you would tell would be your husband. But it was Gilbert (he was at the appointment with you waiting outside) thats who you went to first; you went to Gilbert and just hugged him for a solid 20 minutes.

"The Awesome I am back! Und the shopping is done!" Gilbert smirks with pride this is possibly the only time he has ever done any type of work without being told to do it.  Gilbert takes a seat across from you "have you told mein bruder yet?"

You push your (H/L) (H/C) hair out of your face "No not yet Gil, when we get back home." Pam comes across to you and Gilbert.
"Here you are (Name), and a strawberry milkshake for Gilbert." She hands over your plastic bag full of treats – mostly caramel – and hands Gilbert his strawberry milkshake.

"Wow (Name) are you going share some of those with me?" You turn a give Gilbert an evil death stare, one that mimics Russia's dark aura, and he backs off instantaneously.

"Thanks Pam, see you in a couple of days" Pam gets back to work in the cafe, as Gilbert gently helps you to your feet making sure that you don't fall. You and Gilbert head to the car and set off towards home.


"Ludvig, ve're home!" Gilbert screamed as he walked through the door. Instead of Ludwig coming down the hall you were greeted by, or more like tackled by Feliciano.

"Ve (Name) I don't want to run anymore laps!" The Italian tightly hugs your stomach. Fearing one of Feliciano's bone breaking hug you started to panic, though Gilbert was already grappling to get him off you, as you said he had become very protective of you. Feli's arms are no wrapped around Gilbert's torso, still begging to stop training as he drags his feet not bothering to walk with Gilbert down the hall. Ludwig's walking towards you now passing Gilbert on the way thanking him for looking after Feliciano.

"Ja, vhatever" Gilbert response.

"Hallo, honey" Ludwig Beilschmidt, your husband of a now two years. He wraps his strong arms around you gently so that it doesn't hurt his 'baby' sharing his warmth with you, you melt into the hug. He kisses you on the cheek. "Und sorry again for missing the doctor's appointment today."

"It's alright Ludwig; I know how busy you can get."

"Gilbert's helping me at the moment und its strange, he's been getting up to train in the mornings with me and cleaning und I don't think it's going to last, but its gut, it takes some of the stress off looking after Germany. I think he misses his job after he lost Prussia." A saddened smile grows on Ludwig's face. "I'll get the shopping from the car." Ludwig lightly kisses you on the cheek and heads towards the front door. You 'waddle' to the kitchen and sit down at the large wood table.

Gilbert comes in with two bags of shopping and starts chucking things into the cupboards. Ludwig is sure to have a break-down over that one.

"Have you told him yet (Name)?" The silence you gave him was the only answer he needed."You need to tell him tonight."

"I will Gilbert, just not strait away."


Dinner was awkward. You sat on one of the ends of the table – Gilbert opposite you, all afternoon he was trying to get you to tell Ludwig but you were saving it for when you were alone. Kiku sat to your right quite as always, Ludwig was to your left constantly inquiring about why you're not eating much wurst, and finally was Feliciano sitting in-between Ludwig and Gilbert whining about how you wouldn't eat his pasta.
You put your knife and fork neatly on your plate.
"Sorry guys, but I need to get to bed early tonight. Goodnight." Everyone gave you a cheery goodnight, "see you in bed honey." You leant over to Ludwig and gave him a kiss on the lips.

"You sure you're all right? You haven't eaten much tonight and you need to keep the nutrient levels up." His face shows an expression of worry.

"I'm fine; I'll see you in a while." You stood up and headed to yours and Ludwig's room.
'When he comes to bed then I'll tell him' you thought to yourself.

You get changed into some warm and comfy pyjamas, brushed your teeth and hopped into the large king size bed. You lie in bed waiting for Ludwig. In your head you think of all the reactions he might have: Very Happy is what you hoped for but it could easily be shocked or anger for not telling him sooner. You dismissed the last one; the doctor's appointment was only today. The door opens silently and Ludwig soundlessly steps in he closes the door with you to his back.

"Ludwig darling" You say.

He spins around and smiles brightly at you "sorry I thought you vere asleep".

"No I waited, I have something to tell you" you swing your legs over the side of the bed to stand up but Ludwig is already there in front of you.

"No need to get up liebste" his words are full of kindness; he gently retches out and places a hand just under your shirt so that he could rub your stomach. "Now what were you going to say?"

"Well at the doctor's today..." Bump, one of the babies kicked right where Ludwig's hand was in the middle of your stomach.

"Honey! It's kicking!" His face was in pure shock and happiness at that moment. You were over the moon with joy but you had to tell him about the triplets, now.

"Just hear me out" Bump. This time it was just to the right, nothing making it suspicious.
Ludwig's hand starts moving around your stomach. You had only seen him smile this much before on a few occasions. His hand moves over to the far left of your stomach.

"Ludwig. We're having triplets!" You say out loud not letting another thing stop you. His face turns to confusion not quite understanding what you had just said that is until another small kick it the far left of your stomach where his hand rests. He rises from the ground and takes a step back. The connection and warmth disappearing with his hand. You face down not wanting to look at his face; was he happy or upset? But why would he be upset? All these idea and thoughts raced through your head rapidly. But was broken by your husband's words.

"(Name) that's... that's." You raise your head just to see the shock and happiness in his face before he drops to the ground like a sack of potatoes. Fainted.

He lay there motionless on the wooden floor. You didn't know what to do; there was someone who could help though. "GILBERT!" GIL I NEED YOUR HELP!" Within seconds you could hear feet running down the hall towards your room. The feet get louder until the door swings open to reveal Gilbert-the mighty personification of the 'awesome' Prussia – in a pair of Austrian flag boxes on. You giggle in your head. Your eyes moved across the room the Ludwig. "Ludwig...well".

Gilbert follows your gaze and when he retches Ludwig and realises what happen he starts laughing
"KESESESE~ (Name) I wasn't expecting that! For a man who has been in heaps of wars he sure is weak!"

"Gil! Can you just get him on the bed - we can leave him on the floor!"

"JA, okay (Name)." After great difficult Gilbert was finally able to half carry, half drag Ludwig to the bed.  You look to your husband obvious to the world around him, a sad smile appears on your face his warmth so distant from you. Gilbert noticed this "(Name) would you like me to sleep with you tonight?" The offer was strange 'what is he saying!' you thought to yourself, your head spun up to look at Gilbert's ruby eyes. All you could see in face was care and worry, his ever-present smirk nowhere to be seen. He obviously understood what you were feeling. Small tears formed in the corner of your eyes.

"Yes Gil that would be great." You relied with a small smile. Gilbert moved over to the side Ludwig was on and gently tugged him over more to the side, and then came back to where you sat on the edge. He lent down and gave you a hug.

"You're an awesome Frau (Name) und I know Ludvig will very happy vhen he vakes up so don't vorry." He let go and climbed into the middle of the bed, as it was King size there was no problem of space but Gilbert still went closer to Ludwig to give you more. He was always this kind to you when you two were alone – always dropping his over-the-top 'awesome' personality.

"Did you know (Name) one of my siblings was albino as well, Germania had a very strong gene und maybe he passed it to Ludwig! Kesesese that would be awesome!" now the smirk comes back
"Gute Nacht (Name)".
"Good night Gilbert" you reach over a lightly hold his hand. You see his face set into a small smile before you turn the light off. 'Everything will be fine in the morning' you thought to yourself before you drifted off to sleep.
My first Reader X Hetalia.

I would like to do a couple more chapters only if people actually read it.

I know Gilbert is really out of character but he's my favourite character and I don't like to write him in a negative way. Any way he is a really caring uncle
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Ameriawesome Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2015  Student General Artist
I'd prob end up naming my kids (if I ever had any...) unisex names. (Just cause they're cool. And I would want my kinds to be able to express whatever gender they please...)
Brookyln, Eren, and Skyler.
BleuJaye Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"(Name) that's... that's." You raise your head just to see the shock and happiness in his face before he drops to the ground like a sack of potatoes. Fainted.

*dies laughing*
monokuma2018 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Student Artist
Germany : gil you have some explaining to do!

Me: what do you think are good names? I'm asking both of you * dark aura*

Both: Brooke, Natalie, & Roy.

I'm going for two girls and one boy, gender swapped of me, prussia and Germany ^.^
SmileMolly Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Potatoes is Love

Potatoes is Life Stickers - Just a Potato 
SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
but when they drop

you gotta get help
muuu1234 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014
Gil Is such an overprotective soon-to-be-uncle X3
ZEAWSUMPERSON1 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
HAHAHA!!!ludwig fainted~ the allmighty germany is down~
DarkbeautyXjeff Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm albino O.o 
Isabellathekiller16 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
That's so cool!!!!!!!!! :) 
PrussiaIsAwesomeMan Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
Is there a pt. 2? If not, will there be one in the future? c:
Also, I can do a pretty good Russia so this was very accurate.
:iconrussiastareplz: kolkolkol
Earthling101 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
By the response this piece has gotten I think I better make a part 2 when I have time to do so :)
PrussiaIsAwesomeMan Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
YAY :DDDDD :iconhugplz:
AnimezingOtaku Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, Luddy~!
UWished1 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It would be adorable to see a albino baby
Theanimeangel Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
LOL, anyone else thinking of PrusAus right now? I don't ship it but it's still an awesome legit paring.
greekgeek1213 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love it! Please write more!
D34Dprinc322 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
A couple more chapters would be well appropriated
lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol lol lol he fainted that is so cute i thinck gil will be an awesome uncle lol no pun in tended 
BDETheRev Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Imagine Germany when he wakes up to see his lover sleeping with his brother....... I made a derp face when thinking about it. I love the story a lot! It's funny because I'm an identical twin.
KuroBaraHime357 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
iluv2camp99 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Aww this was so cute!
venblack1398 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist
Germania couldn't have had the gene, it's a sex linked trait... If he were to have it, he would have to be albino to.
Earthling101 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
iluv2camp99 has explained it exactly how I would.

Have you anything else to say about the Story?
venblack1398 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist
I love the story but if there is such an obvious flaw with logic that even an American middle schooler may be able to point it out to you then I would consider relooking at it.
Earthling101 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Ok. there are much better ways to critise someones work.
Im just going to defend myself and my writing here when normally I don't bother.

I was younger then a 'Middle Schooler' when I wrote this.
And Im still getting people commenting and enjoying this story
So obviously there is nothing wrong with it.

Also Hetalia is ficton, so I can do what I want.
iluv2camp99 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
It could be a recessive gene .-. Therefore a previous gen. Could have had it, passed it to germania; it being recessive would not have caused him to have it. So it was still recessive through Ludwig, but resurface with Prussia. So, since it's hidden in Ludwigs genes now it may come out resurface when I/you(the reader) have the children.
venblack1398 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist
What you all are thinking of is an autosomal recessive trait where there is equal chance to receive the recessive trait regardless of gender. Another example of a sex linked disease is color blindness. A few examples of autosomal traits are attached earlobes and having a widows peak hairline.
venblack1398 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist
No that doesn't work because it is a sex linked recessive trait. Sex linked traits are traits that are passed through the X chromosome. Therefore the only way to be a carrier is to be a girl. Guy's who have the gene are automatically albino.
A-NonnyMouseFangirl Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't girls have XX and guys have XY?
venblack1398 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist
Yeah exactly. The X chromosome holds genes such as the one for albinism. Because guys have only 1 X chromosome, if they have a gene for albinism in that X chromosome they become an albino. Girls on the other hand have 2 X chromosomes and can only get albinism if they have the gene for it in both chromosomes.
A-NonnyMouseFangirl Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh... I thought it would be easier for girls to show albinism cause they have twice the chances. Derp. I forgot its a recessive gene. XD Sorry
venblack1398 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist
No it's fine!

The last person I tried to explain this to called me a liar and tried to report me...

Thanks for listening!
A-NonnyMouseFangirl Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Really? That's kind of... No offense to them but that's pretty stupid. Reporting someone for knowing more stuff then them?

No prob~
SonJessica Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
More chapters more chapters more chapters!
Breakslover Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
Oh dear god triplets... ._. But I like the story! 
Fortheloveofchaos Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Prussia: kesesese~ *gets up and runs away*
great story :iconthumbsupplz:
Susinko Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
This was so sweet!  Triplets!  Wow.  That sure surprised Ludwig!  Prussia was really sweet in this story.
Gekko73 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
My Babies names are:
BERLIN: :iconfemaleplz:
VIENNA: :iconmaleplz:
MUNICH: :iconmaleplz:
xxSoldierSiplexx Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^___^ I am burdened with glorious kawaii.
Treekoi Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I definately think you should make other chapters. :D
IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'd like there to be those few chapters mentioned ^-^

This is adorable and sweet. It makes me happy and I love it! :D
Lindori-chan Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, people actually read it! So (please) continue it!
hottygirl101 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student General Artist
I wonder if he fainted in a salute?
Melanieunoxx Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
Lawl,Ludwig fainted...I think I've fainted. ;3

JayHasNotions Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student General Artist
I can actually see it.
Gilbert acting like that, I mean.
I think that's how he actually would react, haha.

But aweee, I love this ;w; Can't wait for you to add more (even if you weren't planning to in the beginning) ♡
AkasunaYuki3 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
Kavahle22 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Squee! :iconyaygermanyplz:
Demon-Sebastian Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Woo! This was great. It'd be nice if there were more chapters. :)
KuraiNatome Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
d'awww! Gil 's so sweet! ^^ and poor Ludwig... lol
AkaruiTenshi Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student General Artist
This was so sweet~!
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